Talk:2021 West Coast Eagles women's season

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Review: November 14, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2021 West Coast Eagles women's season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 22:13, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking at this! — Ghost River 22:13, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Infobox and lede[edit]

Good

Background[edit]

"2020 was their first year in the AFL Women's competition." → "They began playing in the AFL Women's league during the 2020 season."
"mens' team" → "men's team"
"continued on being"

Playing list[edit]

"a trade that involves West Coast" → "a trade that involved West Coast"
Link 2020 AFL Women's draft in the second paragraph and delink in the third
- Which exact phrase do you think should be linked? Steelkamp (talk) 06:32, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Mixed sentence tense in the sentence beginning "If players were undrafted"

Season summary[edit]

Quite long without subheads; maybe break up by month like baseball season GAs?
- I broke it up by rounds. Steelkamp (talk) 06:32, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020, however it changed several times after that due to restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic" → "The planned fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020; continued restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic, however, forced it to change several times"
The way it's currently set up, "reigning premiers" feels a bit WP:EASTEREGGy to me; should mention earlier that Adelaide are the reigning champs
"for West Coast. Brianna" → "for West Coast, but three players suffered injuries:"
"This meant that" I'm a little confused about what "this" is supposed to mean; is it because it's a Western Derby?
"because a knife fell off" → "when a knife fell off"
Missing period after "four outs for round 2"
"wasn't considered too bad" → "was not considered a total failure"
"Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore played, after their injuries ended up not being serious" → "Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore's injuries were minor enough to allow them to return"
was also due to play her first game back from her knee injury, but was a late out due to her knee repetitive phrasing
I'm assuming "Grace Kelly" should be targeted towards Grace Kelly (footballer) and not the princess it currently links to

Awards[edit]

"Mikayla Bowen was named" → "Bowen was also named"

References[edit]

Good!

General comments[edit]

Images are properly licensed and relevant
Images should be moved slightly to avoid MOS:SANDWICH issues
Per MOS:CAPTION, the captions, as full sentences, should end in periods
No stability concerns in the revision history
Copyvio score looks great at 7.4%

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — Ghost River 22:58, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have done all changes bar one. See my comment above. Steelkamp (talk) 06:32, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've made the last change myself. Passing now — Ghost River 16:19, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]