Talk:2010–11 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

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June 14, 2011Good article nomineeListed
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 13, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the 2010–11 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team features an incoming class with the sons of two former National Basketball Association players, one of whom is the younger brother of a current one?

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:16, 10 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It's been on the oldest noms long enough, so I'll give this a review. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:16, 10 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "The team will play" fix tense, since the season's over no future/present tense should exist.
  • "The team was captained by Zack Novak who became one of the forty Academic All-American finalists for the second year in a row and Stu Douglass." add commas after Novak and row
  • Have Mike Jackson link to the right guy (who i don't think is on the disamb page, so unlinking is okay as well).
  • "The 2010 class includes" tense
  • "2010–11 team's front court will be composed of" tense
  • "Thus, he will be able to join the team following the completion of the fall 2010 semester." tense
  • To me, it's a bit odd to see the accolades section bigger that the regular season one. Not sure what can be moved around or trimmed, but it did catch my eye. It's a fairly significant departure from last year's Michigan basketball article, which in terms of structure I think is much better.
    • I am not going to lie here. Last year the regular season section was game-by-game and this year it was highlighted games. I am not really going to be putting that much effort into article creation going forward and this article reflects that. For college basketball, which can have as many as 40 games, I do not believe game-by-game is required at GAC. I could be wrong.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:44, 12 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to make 4 three point shots." four
  • "It was Michigan first" Michigan's
  • "Breslin Center 1997" since 1997
  • "The team has had" had
  • I don't really like the structure of the regular season article. It would be better chronologically, with at least a few non-conference games added in if they were of importance. The way it's written now almost creates a POV.
  • "After starting the conference schedule with a 1–6 record" comma after record
  • Multiple deadlinks exist: see here. Some you can just remove the url, others may need a new source.

I'll put the article on hold then give it another read through once these issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:31, 12 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Most of the stuff checks out, but I would like the accolades spread out in the regular season section, with perhaps the end of the season ones moving to after the postseason part. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:08, 13 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks ok now so will pass. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:08, 14 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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