Talk:2001 Harrah's 500 (CART)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 14:27, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Will review this soon

Lead

• and his teammate Cristiano da Matta took over fifth. - took over fifth from whom ?

Background

• No issues

Practice and qualifying

• lap time before rain stopped all on-track activity at 12:28 p.m. EDT (UTC+04:00) - By then , how much of the session was completed ?
• It stopped raining for about half an hour before rain returned to the area --> It stopped raining for about half an hour before rain returned to the area .
  • I've changed this sentence to something similar. MWright96 (talk) 16:07, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Race

• Papis overtook Bräck for the lead on the back stretch - On what lap ?
• while Andretti moved to third by lap 28 --> while Andretti had moved into third by lap 28
• It was Carpentier's racing victory since the 1996 Atlantic Championship at Laguna Seca. - Did you mean first racing victory ?

Post-race

• No issues

Comments

• @MWright96: The review is now complete. Kpgjhpjm 12:51, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
  • @Kpgjhpjm: Thanks again for taking on another review. All of the points raised have been addressed and I have made some supplementary changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 16:07, 1 December 2018 (UTC)