Talk:Nita A. Farahany

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It's a good idea to use LP as a template for your bio - smart! I look forward to reading your article! Bridges2Information (talk) 21:13, 7 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 April 2019 and 7 June 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): ScienceMusical. Peer reviewers: Konamalo.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 01:39, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hi! I think your draft is a really good start. Here are some positive things I noticed:

  • Your tone was pretty neutral throughout the article. I didn't notice any words or statements that stood out as either positive or negative.
  • I really liked all of the sections, and the way they were organized. It makes sense to highlight her educational achievements, then her achievements in bioethics, followed by all other work. The only section I would possibly add is a "personal life" or "early life" section, because it's always fun to learn about how and where the person grew up.
  • The section about her TED talk was also very interesting and informative.
  • All references seemed pretty reliable, and there was a good amount of them for how much information is currently in the article. The more quality sources, the better.

The only thing I was a little confused about was the picture and info box on the right, which was about Linus Pauling. I'm not sure if this was just for practice and you're adding her picture and info later, but either way the draft looks great. Keep editing and working on it, and I think it will be a wonderful finished product.

Konamalo (talk) 18:32, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This article is so interesting - and her life is dizzying! She's accomplished so much. I wonder if there are any stats or reviews of the TED talk that could be included. I'll try to remember to look around. The TED talk was very informative and also frightening!! Bridges2Information (talk) 07:09, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Other work[edit]

This section reads like a CV. Except for the TED talk subsection, I'm not sure we need this level of detail. Thoughts? Rklawton (talk) 13:15, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

More information is better than less. It just reflects how accomplished she is. 2600:8802:571B:E00:280E:1B9C:31E4:2015 (talk) 16:17, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nita calahany[edit]

I have no doubts, countless evidences of having implanted brain translation devices in me in a non-consensual way. It brought me losses, irreversible losses, I feel invaded, raped, It tortures me! It's been 1 year since I've slept, I close my eyes for a maximum of 30 minutes a day.

How can Iturn it off? What specific tests I need to do? Help me please Dan +5519991935894 Brazil 2804:14C:4E8:8B46:901B:E6BE:2C3E:C776 (talk) 05:25, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This is not relevant to Wikipedia. 2600:8802:571B:E00:280E:1B9C:31E4:2015 (talk) 16:18, 24 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]