Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Cainnech of Aghaboe

I am new to this and need feedback. At the moment it is tagged with Cleanup from November 2007 and All pages needing cleanup and has a Start-Class rating on the quality scale. I want to know where to go from here to improve the article. --Okeeffe.christopher (talk) 06:55, 8 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, I think you've done a good job of adding references, but I do have some comments:

Used Cainnech name throughout article. Unless other names are relivent. Okeeffe.christopher (talk) 19:18, 8 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~"settled at Glengiven in what is now County Londonderry under its chief" I don't understand this sentence.~~

Section has been rewritten and should be clearer. Okeeffe.christopher (talk) 19:38, 8 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The sections should be placed in chronological order.
~~"He converted his foster-brother, Geal-Breagach, who assisted him in founding a monastery at Drumachose, two miles southeast of Limavady." Repetition.~~

Removed

"Patron of" and "Other information" sections should be removed and the pertinent information integrated elsewhere in the article.
~~Amalgamate the "Notes", "References" and "Sources" sections into one section with commonly formatted references.~~

Now contains a References section and a Bibliography section Okeeffe.christopher (talk) 20:03, 8 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The image Image:San canizio kilkenny.jpg is missing a source.
I am unable to distinguish which parts of his life come from contemporary sources, and which are later inventions. This should be made clearer.
The article could be expanded by setting the scene: what was the status of the church at the time? Who were the main leaders? What were the trade routes? How was the economy structured? And then this could be related back to the importance of sheep, his ties with Scotland, the early church, etc. DrKiernan (talk) 10:42, 8 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]