Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Aki Jones

Aki Jones[edit]

I'm aiming to get some advice on how to improve this article to B-Class. Also, I'd hope to get more information, since as an Australian, I know little about NFL. Scalene^{•UserPage•Talk•Contributions•Biography•Є•} 23:36, 28 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou[edit]

As a Greek I know even less! What I can offer are some general comments: the article is a stub right now, and I do not know if a peer-review can offer much right now. In order to bring this article to B-Class status, first read carefully the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. Then, you could implement the following suggestions:

Cite properly your article per WP:CITE and WP:FOOTNOTES. Proper citing is now a prerequisite for B-Class as well; not just for GA and FA.
Expand the article with more details, so as to make it a proper biography (personal life, early years, family, more info about his career). Especially, you should expand stubby sections, such as "NFL Career" (and, by the way, avoid to wikilink headings as you did here).
When the article gets a bit bigger, make a proper lead which will summarize it per WP:LEAD.
Then, come back for a new peer-review!--Yannismarou 12:59, 10 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]