Wikipedia:Peer review/Robert Downey, Jr. filmography/archive1
Robert Downey, Jr. filmography[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I think it is a good representation of Downey's filmography with good referencing.
Thank you! LADY LOTUS • TALK 13:36, 8 September 2014 (UTC)
Comments from SNUGGUMS[edit]
Looks pretty good so far.....
- Lead
- Seems a bit repetitive with the use of "In *year*, he starred"..... switch it up and use "Downey" for some instances, i.e. try things like "Downey was cast as Tony Stark / Iron Man in the 2008 Marvel Studios film Iron Man". Done I like that better, thank you :)
- Film
- It really isn't needed to say "credited as Robert Downey" when really that's his name (suffix not withstanding)
- I would say to include his role for "Deadwait", but can't seem to find anything on it myself
- Include any major awards/nominations his roles received within "notes", such as Golden Globes
- There is his separate awards page for that though...? LADY LOTUS • TALK 20:12, 11 September 2014 (UTC)
- See also
- This section doesn't really belong, and neither does the link to his awards/nominations
- Is there any reason why? I figured it would since it's a separate page from his main one, it's the point of a lot of editors on why they wanted the templates for the boxes deleted that had the main page, awards and filmography was because there was a See Also section for it.
- References
- FN9: Link Rotten Tomatoes Done
- FN17: Link The New York Times Done
- FN18: Link Entertainment Weekly Done
- FN29: "The Telegraph" should read The Daily Telegraph and be linked Done
- FN31: Link Los Angeles Times, which does not have "The" in its title Done
- FN's 38–40: reliable? Done
- FN42: unreliable Done
- FN47: link Variety (magazine) Done
- FN62: unlink Entertainment Weekly Done
- External links
- (Just a thought) it might be helpful to have Downey's website and perhaps his Rotten Tomatoes profile as EL's
- Does Downey have an official website that I'm just not finding? lol, I'll get his Rotten after LADY LOTUS • TALK 20:12, 11 September 2014 (UTC)
- Rotten Tomatoes was easy to get :P, but from what I could find, it looks like the only websites on him are fansites Snuggums (talk / edits) 05:14, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
- Does Downey have an official website that I'm just not finding? lol, I'll get his Rotten after LADY LOTUS • TALK 20:12, 11 September 2014 (UTC)
This is definitely on its way to becoming FL :) Snuggums (talk / edits) 19:36, 11 September 2014 (UTC)
Comments from Cowlibob[edit]
Mainly ref check from me.
- IMDb says he was on 25 episodes of Ally McBeal and include time he was on the show as 2000-02 Done
- Mussolini: The Untold story TV miniseries is included on IMDb and it also lists him as exec producer on The Judge check both of these and add. Done
- Screen Crush, Dandy Chick, Screen Rush, Row 3, Cinema Blend, Split Sider reliable? If not, consider alternatives. Cowlibob (talk) 11:21, 13 September 2014 (UTC)
- I consider Cinema Blend, Split Sider and Screen Crush reliable, but I'll replace the others, so consider it done :) LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:45, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
Comments from SchroCat[edit]
Hi Lady, All looks good here, with just a couple of comments from me. I've tweaked the prose a tiny bit to make it flow a little better, but please feel free to revert if you don't like it. (A couple of other bits added since the reversion tothe previous (and well-sourced) version)
Film
- It's more normal to sort on the surnames of characters, I think Done I did have the surnames sorted until MisterMorton removed it....but it's back now LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:26, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
- I hate the use of the N/A template. Looking at the table as a whole, my attention is drawn straight to it with the cell a different colour and the text centred. It is also unclear what N/A means here. Not available? Not applicable? A left-aligned endash will suffice, and won't distract readers. Done
- It's a thought to centralise the refs - I'll leave that entirely to your personal preference (but ditto for the other tables as well) Done
- Comment: I noticed that MisterMorton removed the reference column along with ALL the sorts in the names and titles column and the "row" and "col". I undid that edit but wondering why he considered it "cleanup" by removing all of that? LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:26, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
Video games
- As it's a one-item list, it shouldn't be sortable Done