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Neuroepithelial cell[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because the other contributors Guru and Spencer and I would really like to get it up to snuff with some of the other assorted neuroscience pages, at least so it's no longer a stub, and possibly GA status.

Thanks, Leomagrini (talk) 03:48, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - absolutely state right now that I'm no expert, but this review will be technical and hopefully useful!

Lead is too brief, it should summarise the article - see WP:LEAD.
If you use abbreviations (like CNS), make sure you put them in parentheses after the first use.
And avoid using them in section headings.
Nothing major, I guess this is a USEng article, fetus just looks wrong to me!
Induction is a disambiguation link.
Suggest you link "invaginates".
"and the basal side is oriented outward," replace and with while.
"neural tube" is overlinked.
"hree distinct regions of growth.[3][1] " order the refs numerically.
Should "self renew" be hyphenated?
"antiproliferative gene" and "proliferative" - any decent links for these?
Why not "During the G1 phase" rather than just "During G1..."?
"them multipotent - a definite distinction " should be an en-dash, not a hyphen. Check other instances.
Link mitosis.
"On a whole, neurogenesis" what does "On a whole" add to this?
"o be seen. [6]" remove space before ref.
"Dysembryoplastic Neuroepithelial Tumors are a rare, benign tumour" no need for the capitalisation and you have "Tumors are a rare, benign tumour..." mixing up the numbers plural/singular...
"children and teenagers under the age of twenty" pretty obvious that teenagers and children are under 20.
" little to no long term" normally would expect some hyphenation.
"the ages of 20-50 " en-dash required.
Image caption is in bold, why?
" problems [10]." -> "problems.[10]"
Glucocorticoids - is this a proper noun?

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:28, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]