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Juhu Aerodrome

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I've listed this article for peer review because Iv been working on it from time to time and Id appreciate some feedback on how it looks.

Thanks, Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 13:20, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Redtigerxyz's comments

I am considering that you would like to nominate for GA and commenting considering WP:GA?

Frankly, I dint know where it exactly stood, hence the PR. Its historically important since the first commercial flight in India landed here in 1932. Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 13:30, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

• Removed the 1 line section "Airlines and destinations"

I see you have already done that. Thanks! Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 13:30, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

• Any statistics like dates like "around 1928", 28 May 1968 incident need references. Served as city's airport and "Two bitumen runways were in operation and a third was planned for construction in 1939 but this never occurred." also need references

Added some more info and John Stroud ref. Removed the 1968 incident - that was actually a crash it seems, not at Juhu. Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 07:16, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

• When the second runway became defunct needs to be noted

Cant seem to find that, but Iv found newspaper refs to say there are encroachments around the secondary runway. Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते}

• "the Maharashtra Home Guard who will soon hand over charge" may be a dated statement. The hand over may have happened. Please check. If you are unsure of the current status, note that it was announced in June 2011.

I think noting it was announced June 2011 would be the way to go as I cant find any sources saying its been done. Infact, as of September it has still not been taken over. Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 13:30, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

• The lead needs to be expanded to elaborate on current status
• I am unsure about the reliability of the last 2 references. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 12:18, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

Iv supplimented the Slumdog one with a Livemint ref (part of Hindustan Time/Wall Street Journal JV). Also added another shooting info Around The Globe^{सत्यमेव जयते} 07:21, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

Redtigerxyz is spot on. Are you sure that A Wednesday movie's climax was shot there. It is mentioned in the movie that is a fact but it is possible that it was shot somewhere else so check it out.--Vyom25 (talk) 08:50, 11 December 2011 (UTC)