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I'd Do Anything for Love (but I Won't Do That)

I think this article is pretty comprehensive now. I'd appreciate constructive criticism, particularly with regard to passing a GA nom. Of course, if you spot some grammar/spelling issues, then it would be probably just as quick to correct them rather than leaving a message here. Similarly, I don't really find vague statements, like "some sentences are poorly structured", useful. The JPS^{talk to me} 22:37, 16 November 2006 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:54, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

• I think the section on the Music video perhaps runs on too long; it resorts to plain exposition and is unsourced around the middle section. Other than that, the article seems pretty good (with the exception of a rather out-of-place Spiceworld reference that I personally would delete). Laïka 13:05, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your feedback. I've cut down the description of the video. Rather than delete the Spiceworld reference, I've moved it into the 'cultural influence' section, where it seems more appropriate. I guess if we delete it altogther, some anon is going to come along and recreate the 'trivia' section and throw it in there... The JPS^{talk to me} 13:17, 19 November 2006 (UTC)