Wikipedia:Peer review/Halifax, West Yorkshire/archive1

Halifax, West Yorkshire[edit]

I've spent quite some time cleaning up this article into a well polished one. I want to see what people think of the article Sceptr e ^(Talk) 17:54, 1 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Well, for one there are no references (how can I be sure that the current content isn't exaggerated or, at worst, fabricated?). Also, several major sections are missing (geography, population makeup, history). If your intention is to get this article to featured status, it has a long ways to go. Please see the article on Bath, England, as an example of a good article on a British city. Pentawing 05:49, 2 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

There are a few dotted links, and I am trying to get references, but your input is useful, and as a town citizen, it's not fabricated. Sceptr e ^(Talk) 11:44, 2 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Though someone from the city might vouch for the article, the same can't be said for someone who is unfamiliar with the town. Hence, the need for references. Pentawing 21:19, 2 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, and I've added references where I can. Sceptr e ^(Talk) 22:02, 2 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I went in and rearranged the article as well as cleaned up some wording (please see some of my comments throughout the article). The article is still rather sparse. For instance, there is no information on geography, government, climate, economy, and transporation. Also, please link esoteric terms (for instance A-level) so that a person from outside the UK can find out what these mean. Pentawing 22:54, 8 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

mucho appreciato, I'll work on some more sections tommorow. Sceptr e ^(Talk) 23:46, 8 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]