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Erin O'Toole[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am unsure about the following things:

The lead. I'm aware that the lead likely has problems and needs improvement, but I would like some advice on how to improve it, especially when it comes to O'Toole's political positions. I made a summary of some of his positions in the lead, but I'm not entirely sure what should and shouldn't be included.
Content in the "Background" and "Political Career" sections (before "Leadership of the Conservative Party"). I'm not sure whether those sections have all the encyclopedic content that would fit in the article.

My goal with this article is to get it to GA, possibly FA if I can get that far. If you feel this article is a good enough GA candidate (I doubt it is), please tell me! Thanks, Username⁶⁸⁹² 19:12, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Some feedback was received at another user's talk page. Username 6892 _(PR) 04:31, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]