Wikipedia:Peer review/Doctor Eggman/archive1

Doctor Eggman[edit]

I know this isn't the right place to put it, but the project page won't let me put this information there, so I'll put it here for awhile. I'm sorry if it's inconvient!

This article seems to be written cleary and about the subject. Is there anything wrong with it? --71.104.187.145 04:26, 24 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I put this request in the right place for you. Maybe you can't edit the project page because you're an anon? -- RattleMan 19:01, 24 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Is "He has an IQ of 300, the maturity of an eight-year old" factual? It requires a citation. Towards the bottom, I'm seeing screens and screens of black text without a single internal wiki-link. The article needs a reference section and inline citations (WP:FOOTNOTE). AndyZ _t 21:04, 24 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, then, I'll try to add footnotes. --71.104.185.157 04:33, 25 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I had trouble but I added a few. Any other advice? --71.104.181.162 01:17, 26 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]