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Charles George Baker[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I have made substantial additions to this page including more detail, finding references for uncited content and formatting the page. Thanks, Exemplo347 (talk) 10:13, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Hi Exemplo347, thanks for your work so far. Was there a particular aspect of the article you wanted feedback on, or a goal (eg. GAN)? Here are some general comments:

Given the length of the article, the lead should be longer than a single sentence - suggest at least a full paragraph and more likely two
Is anything more known about his life prior to 1854? Or his later life? At the moment the article reads mostly as if its topic were the attack at Suhejnee rather than Baker himself
Find-a-Grave is not a reliable source and shouldn't be included in the References section; it may be included in External links. Nikkimaria (talk) 22:15, 30 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your feedback Nikkimaria - I've made changes to the article using another few sources I was able to locate. If you (and hopefully other authors) are able to have a look and tell me what would need to be done to bring it to the level of GAN then I'd be very grateful.

Exemplo347 (talk) 19:31, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]