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Alphabet[edit]

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I've tackled all of the GAN issues from the two previous nominations, but I want to see if anyone else may raise any more problems before I try to nominate it again.

Thanks, SomeoneOK (talk) 17:42, 10 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720[edit]

Comments after a quick skim:

Lede is too long. Recommend 4 paragraphs maximum.
There's some references in the Bibliography section that are not used as inline citations. I suggest using them in the article or removing them from the references.

I hope this helps! Z1720 (talk) 03:04, 23 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! SomeoneOK (talk) 15:03, 23 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]