Wikipedia:Peer review/All That/archive1

All That[edit]

I would like the article on All That reviewed by a peer in order to see what can be improved. The opening paragraph looks all right in my opinion, but I think the claim that Roundhouse was moved to Sundays before being cancelled in 1996, the last two paragraphs under the "Soundtrack" heading, the reasons why the sixth season was shortened, The "Old All That vs. New All That" subsection, The Casting Controversy, The On-Air Dare, The Return fo Good Burger, and Dark Humor need to be reviewed for accuracy, NPOV, and unverifiable claims. And just mention anything else that needs improvement. Thank you. PF4Eva 21:16, 22 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This may seem pernickety, but inline citations go at the end of the referenced sentence, after the full stop. The citations in the article seem all over the place. If you're planning to go for GA or FA, this will be insisted on. Good luck! Dev920 22:15, 22 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I am considering maybe re-nominating it for FA, if the page can be cleaned up enough to make the cut. I have done a major revision as per Dev920's above comments; most of which focused on sourcing and NPOV. What else can be improved in this article? PF4Eva 21:31, 23 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]