Wikipedia:Peer review/Ahnenerbe/archive1
Ahnenerbe[edit]
One of the most misunderstood aspects of the Nazi legacy, it was the inspiration for the archealogists in the Indiana Jones movies, and is commonly confused with the Thule Society - though in truth far less esoteric. Could use suggestions on cleaning up the presentation style, as well as ideas on what to include/disclude from the article. (is there such a thing as too many historic images?). I acknowledge that the discussion on Neuschwabenland is missing, as is the formal hierarchy (on talk page) which I can't imagine how to incorporate other than as a prohibitively long chapter of its own. Also, other than Nuremberg trial references, it's very hard to give 'authoritative' references for much of it *frown* Sherurcij 14:50, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
My comments:
- Too many short sentences/paragraphs. The flow is pretty bad, it could do with a major copy-edit. I'd start with merging together some sections/paragraphs to make it look neater.
* The See also section links to too many non-existant articles.
- fixed, tySherurcij
- There is no External links section.
- History section is very short.
- Get rid of the image galleries and place the images aside the context instead.
- Some of the images need more specific fair use tags (such as {{film-screenshot}} instead of just {{screenshot}}). Fair use images also need fair use rationales.
— Wackymacs 15:17, 8 December 2005 (UTC)