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AT&T Plaza

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I've listed this article for peer review because Torsodog (talk · contribs) and I want to nominate Millennium Park for WP:GTC and this article needs to be audited as too short for WP:GA.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:46, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• Please see comments at the review here, particularly with regard to images and en-dashes.
  • Did I miss an ndash location?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
  • I am going to try to keep the images and hope the article grows into them. They explain the brief history of the space.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:02, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
• The infobox looks a little strange - is that a thumb embedded in an infobox? Is that necessary? It makes the image have three frames...
  • One thing I could use for this infobox is the dimension either length and width or square feet of the plaza. Any help would be appreciated. It is the only significant thing I can think to add to the article that I think should be available.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Otherwise thanks for the infobox suggestion.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
• Image captions are sentence fragments so they don't need full stops.
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:03, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
• "coral groups " choral?
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
• " [2006]." why not "(2006)."?
  • It is a citation template. Is it incorrect?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:23, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 13:46, 17 September 2008 (UTC)