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List of awards and nominations received by Peter Dinklage[edit]

Nominator(s): AffeL (talk) 13:44, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets all of the criterias, I have addressed all of the comments from the last failed FL nomination. - AffeL (talk) 13:44, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"He has been nominated for six Primetime Emmy Awards and eleven Screen Actor Guild Awards" => 11 Screen Actors Guild.

Should I change "eleven" to "11" or "Screen Actor Guild Awards" to "Screen Actors Guild", or both? - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Just change eleven to 11 as MoS advises to spell numbers only less than ten. – FrB.TG (talk) 10:26, 29 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done. - AffeL (talk) 10:54, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"Dinklage received a nomination for the Screen Actors Guild Award for Best Actor and he also garnered a Best Ensemble nomination for the same role" => "Dinklage received nominations for the Screen Actors Guild Award for Best Actor and Best Ensemble".

Done. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"The role earned him nominations for the Chicago Film Critics Association Award and Online Film Critics Society Award. He also won the New York Film Critics Circle Award for the film." - these can be made one sentence. "The role also earned him nominations ... and an award from the New York Film Critics Circle".

Done. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Is the highest-paid bit relevant in this article?

I removed that part. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"Dinklage played the character Bolivar Trask in the 2014 superhero film X-Men: Days of Future Past, a military scientist who creates a range of robots designed to find and destroy mutants" - after "the character Bolivar Trask", you should describe the character not after the film.

Done. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"93 members of the Hollywood Foreign Press Association (HFPA)" - I would cut (HFPA) since it is not really used elsewhere in the article.

Done. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"The Portal Awards are awarded annually to genre television and film" - this makes little sense to me.

Fixed. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Obviously Dinklage is "Nominee" of the Special Achievement Award For Outstanding Talent (see the Satellite table).

Changed "-" to "Peter Dinklage". - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"The SFX Awards are awarded annually to achievements" - awards are awarded to achievers or for achievements.

Changed it to "for..." - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

FN 4 - remove Independent Print Limited per {{cite web}} and {{cite news}} stating, "Do not use the publisher parameter for the name of a work (e.g. a book, encyclopedia, newspaper, magazine, journal, website). Not normally used for periodicals. Corporate designations such as "Ltd", "Inc" or "GmbH" are not usually included. Omit where the publisher's name is substantially the same as the name of the work".

I think I removed all of those. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Check for similar instances.

Checked. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

What makes Looper a reliable source? – FrB.TG (talk) 22:11, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Can't find a reliable source, I will have another look later, if I can't find a good source, then I will remove the New York Film Critics Circle section. - AffeL (talk) 22:55, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I wonder if he actually won the award. I can't find it here, nor do they have that category, it seems. – FrB.TG (talk) 10:31, 29 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

All done. I removed that award. - AffeL (talk) 10:54, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Looks better now. I made these changes to the list. – FrB.TG (talk) 12:42, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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