Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Baccano! episodes/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Dabomb87 23:16, 12 February 2010 [1].

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List of Baccano! episodes

Nominator(s): ~Itzjustdrama ^{? C} 00:12, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

• Featured list candidates/List of Baccano! episodes/archive1

I am nominating this for featured list because I've compared it to similar FLs and I've worked on it to the best of my ability. I feel it also meets the criteria. A note: the series is told in a non-linear format, so some things may read weird. ~Itzjustdrama ^{? C} 00:12, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

• Support. Went through and did a quick copy-edit. As Itzjustdrama indicated, this series is really confusing, and the plot summary reflects that, so bear with it while reading. — sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 03:49, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

• Support. References look great, plot may be confusing but understandable overall. DragonZero (talk · contribs) 09:43, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
• Support. Having watched the series, I can also attest to the confusing manner in which the story is presented in the show itself. The summary simply follows that while detailing the events as clearly as is possible. My only niggle is that a ref in the lead could be moved to the end of the line instead of being next to a comma.Dandy Sephy (talk) 11:20, 7 February 2010 (UTC)
  • It has been moved. ~Itzjustdrama ^{? C} 11:39, 7 February 2010 (UTC)
• Support - my head hurts after that plot, but everything seems to check out. Afro (Its More Than a Feeling) ^{- Afkatk} 23:07, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:54, 12 February 2010 (UTC)

Comments "of Baccano!.[3]" do we need that period? I believe so...the series' title include the exclamation point, so I believe it doesn't count as the ending punctuation mark. But I'm not really sure. I'll probably rearrange the sentence later to avoid the problem. I rearranged the sentence so it reads: "On July 21, 2008, the English adaptation of Baccano! was licensed by Funimation Entertainment." I also asked over at WT:MOS, and you are correct. The period does not have to be there. "choose a starting date" for what? Got it. Could you just clarify that WOWOW is a Japanese PPV station? Added as an appositive. Not sure we really need a link to orchestra. delinked. "the older conductor holds the red-headed one" the red-headed conductor or the red-headed Russo? fixed. Not sure we need to link "dredge" either. delinked. "Jacuzzi is attacked by the Russo. They are killed by Nice and her gang" who is "they" here? Fixed. "Using his right hand, Szilard "devours" him ..." now this needs explanation! Added an appositive so it now says: "Szilard "devours" him, the only way to kill an immortal,..." Changed it again. Now it says "Szilard places his right hand on Barnes' head and "devours" him, the only way to kill an immortal,..." Camorra is overlinked. Fixed. "They issue orders to find her, but something is killing the Lemure" not sure how these are interconnected. Tweaked. Now says: "They issue orders to find her, but they are unable to start searching because something is killing the Lemure." "floor to ceiling " could use hyphenation. Hypenated. "Ennis finds Dallas beating Isaac. While incapacitating him, she inadvertently rescues Isaac" "him" is unclear, you need to reiterate Dallas here. Got it. "woman in fatigues, named Rachel" is episode 9 the first time we know her name then? mhmm. Attempted to make it more obvious by making it "woman in fatigues, revealed to be named Rachel" "recognizes one of the bodies " "one of them...." got it. speakeasy is overlinked. delinked. "The two attempt to unnerve the other," either "each other" or "They attempte to unnerve one another" Went with "one another" Ref 5 claims to be the offical Baccano! website, but so does 6, and they have different URLs... Fixed. Refs need spaced en-dashes, not hyphens. Already changed. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:47, 9 February 2010 (UTC) Got them. ~Itzjustdrama ? C 20:30, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

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