Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Hatshepsut/archive2

Hatshepsut

Self-nom. The article is over the 18th dynasty Egyptian ruler, Hatshepsut. The article has been reviewed, at my request by others so it has under gone a peer review. If featured this article will become Wikipedia:WikiProject Ancient Egypt example article. It has been nominated before in a somewhat confusing FAC. -JCarriker 08:02, 6 November 2005 (UTC)

• I would like to support this nom, as featured articles desperately needs non-western, non-modern articles, but I think this article still needs a bit of work - some of the writing needs better expression (e.g. "As women gained more equality with men, women in history were sought out and reclaimed." - this doesn't quite make sense). Also Civilization IV has already been released in the US market - the "known" part of that sentence should be taken out, and perhaps "AI" should be wikified. Anyway, after some cleanup, I would vote Support, as featured articles desperately needs more articles like this. Bwithh 07:51, 7 November 2005 (UTC)

• Object, as before: The image Image:Hatshepsut.jpg is claimed as GFDL, but it's described as a cropped scan of a book cover. The only terms it can be used under are {{fairuse}}, and that only on an article about the book. Use of the image in Hatshepsut is no more fair use than using an album cover with a dog on it to illustrate dog. --Carnildo 23:47, 7 November 2005 (UTC)