Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Columbine High School massacre/archive2

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Laser brain via FACBot (talk) 23 July 2019 [1].

Columbine High School massacre[edit]

Nominator(s): AceAlen (talk) 21:44, 21 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the Columbine shootings. It has been edited a lot and fully meets the criteria for FAC nomination. Has all the information on the background, shooting and aftermath. Including on Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold. It is a good nomination. AceAlen (talk) 21:44, 21 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Coordinator comment - This hasn't received any commentary yet, but I'm going to archive the nomination as premature. There are some obvious deficiencies in the article including numerous unsourced statements and a lot of choppy prose that needs work to form a cohesive narrative and avoid WP:PROSELINE. I'd recommend going through a peer review process or working with someone at Wikipedia:Mentoring for FAC before renomination. --Laser brain (talk) 16:44, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. --Laser brain (talk) 16:44, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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