User talk:Peter Damian/Free will draft

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History section

One of the first to define free will is Aristotle, who defines it as 'alternative' (ὁπότερ’) in chapter 9 of On Interpretation

μηδὲν δὲ ὁπότερ’ ἔτυχεν εἶναι ἐν τοῖς γιγνομένοις, ἀλλὰ πάντα εἶναι καὶ γίγνεσθαι ἐξ ἀνάγκης (there are no real alternatives, but that all that is or takes place is the outcome of necessity). Bu then there would be no need to deliberate or to take trouble, on the supposition that if we should adopt a certain course, a certain result would follow, while, if we did not, the result would not follow. (ὥστε οὔτε βουλεύεσθαι δέοι ἂν οὔτε πραγματεύεσθαι, ὡς ἐὰν μὲν τοδὶ ποιήσωμεν, ἔσται τοδί, ἐὰν δὲ μὴ τοδί, οὐκ ἔσται).

Peter Damian (talk) 12:46, 29 May 2015 (UTC)