User talk:Naga Sravani Dasari

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Welcome![edit]

Hello, Naga Sravani Dasari, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:09, 23 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi![edit]

Hi Sravani,

Trying to figure out how this talk page works... I'm still not sure if this was due last Sunday or this coming Sunday.Alex--Avardaneg (talk) 01:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Emerging Technologies[edit]

Emerging Technologies
Hey Naga, this is Rashed. I’m full time student as well and this is my first semester in here. I like traveling too. I went to a lot places and visited almost 80% of the states so far. Good to have you in class. Rashed Alzeer (talk) 19:13, 10 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Pkotrike (talk) 04:28, 11 September 2016 (UTC)== Hello Naga sravani! ==[reply]

Hello Naga Sravani, it is great to have you in the class. I wish you a good luck for the rest of the semester. I hope everybody of us will learn something from this class and use it in the future. Thanks.Pkotrike (talk) 04:32, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello[edit]

Hi Sravani,

welcome to this course. I'm so excited working with you in this course. I hope we will have a great semester. All the best for your final project. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Palusam roja (talk • contribs) 00:50, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sravani[edit]

Hai Sravani how are you, I hope you are doing well It is an exciting class that we are in the same class for the first time. I hope that we can gain some knowledge together. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Durgalavanya (talk • contribs) 02:20, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sravani...[edit]

I am just trying to use Talk page with some edits. Looking forward to have a great semester with you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lathivik (talk • contribs) 15:10, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback request[edit]

I got your message. Is there anything I can help you with? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:55, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I assume you mean this section?
  • Only proper nouns should be capitalized. So terms like computer security, personal identification number and password should not be capitalized (except, of course, at the start of a sentence).
  • References go after punctuation, not before, and there shouldn't be a space before a reference. There should be a space after a comma, but none before.
  • "In computer security", the existing wording, is more succinct than "In terms of computer security". It's also the usual way this is done in Wikipedia articles.
  • You need to tighten up the language; "used for obtaining information" not "used for obtaining the information". "The victim's shoulder", not "the victims shouldn't". "However", not "how ever".

    Almost every sentence has these sorts or problems.

  • Everything in the article needs to be supported by a reference. Everything after the first sentence is unreferences. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:54, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback request[edit]

Your draft looks pretty good. There are just a few things that still need doing

  • You need to copyedit it carefully. I noticed several missing spaces after commas, for example.
  • Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to give advice. If you find yourself using "you", you're probably on the wrong track in terms of tone. So the "Occurrences" section, for example, needs to be reworked so that it's describing the problem, not giving people advice. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:02, 28 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Additional feedback[edit]

It looks pretty good but I still see typos. Give it a careful read-through. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:57, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article problems[edit]

Your additions to the shoulder surfing article include passages copied verbatim or nearly verbatim from a non-free source. This was detected by automatic plagiarism detection software. Unfortunately, for copyright reasons, your entire contribution - and all subsequent contributions - had to be deleted (although the non-problematic parts have been restored). Please review the Plagiarism and Copyright training module before proceeding further. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:31, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article Problems[edit]

Hi Ian, is there any way that I can the know where specifically the plagiarism issue has been detected so that I can modify it and work on it.

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