User talk:Hr54ankush

This user is a student editor in Algoma_University/Introduction_to_Community_Economic_and_Social_Development_II_(Winter_2024) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Hr54ankush, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:29, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft[edit]

I returned your draft to your sandbox. Wikipedia already has an iPhone 15 article. Instead of creating a new duplicate article, you should work on improving the existing article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:26, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I also reverted your additions to the iPhone 15 article. A lot of your additions lacked citations to reliable sources. Everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be supported by reliable, inline sources.

There are also problems with tone. You should be writing in a neutral tone, and rely on facts. For example, you wrote

The IPhone 15 redefines the standards of Digital privacy and Security with its meticulously designed features, ensuring that users remain in control of their personal data. At the forefront of defense is the implementation of a strong Password System, serving as the primary barrier against unauthorized access to the device. Complementing this is the option for facial recognition system, offering seamless yet secure ways to unlock the IPhone , authorize transactions, and access third Application software.

Saying that redefines the standards of Digital privacy and Security... doesn't help the reader. For starters, the phone doesn't redefine standards, engineers do, so it's misleading to say that the phone does this. But if you do want to talk about how Apple (I assume) redefined standards, you should discuss the standards that were redefined, and how.
with its meticulously designed features - "meticulous" is an opinion, not a factual statement. If someone notable expresses this opinion, you can report it (with attribution), but you can't state an opinion in Wikipedia's voice.
ensuring that users remain in control of their personal data. This isn't accurate, it's marketing hype. You can explain the privacy features, but you can't say they ensure anything. If you can provide a solid citation that no iPhone 15 user has shared any private information via their phone, that might be ok.
At the forefront of defense - don't use flowery, metaphorical language like this, use plain English
is the implementation of a strong Password System, serving as the primary barrier against unauthorized access to the device. - again, rewrite this in plain English.
Finally, this is unsourced. Everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be verifiable, and the reliable source that allows users to verify the factual claims must be cited.

Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:42, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I just noticed the journal you cited: Zeitschrift für Klassische Homöopathie. You cited a 2006 article from a homeopathy article? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:43, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You just readded this same content, without addressing the aforementioned issues. Please don't start an edit war, fix the deficiencies before you restore this information. Also, it isn't clear to me that all of this merits a whole section titled "Privacy", the various parts might fit better in existing parts of the article. Darkage7 _[Talk] 21:23, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Yamuna Expressway[edit]

Hi there, I've moved your new article to draft space as it appears to be a duplicate of Yamuna Expressway. I encourage you to make edits to that article, rather than working on a duplicate article. I'll also second the tips and pointers given by the users in the above section. Best of luck with editing! ForsythiaJo (talk) 01:01, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, it was done by mistake. Hr54ankush (talk) 03:48, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Hr54ankush/Sugarcane juice[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Hr54ankush/Sugarcane juice, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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April 2024[edit]

Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia, as you did to Sugarcane juice. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it. Read WP:MEDRS - advise you not edit content concerning human health and diseases, as this is not undergraduate material. Zefr (talk) 02:51, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please stop. If you continue to move pages to bad titles contrary to naming conventions or consensus, as you did at User:Abhi Suthar/PUBG Mobile/Hr54ankush Peer Review, you may be blocked from editing. Please do not publish these pages in mainspace. Publish them in userspace by adding the "User:" prefix to each new title. CycloneYoris ^talk! 03:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

School assignments[edit]

Please do not move your school assignments to mainspace. These pages should only be added to your userspace and are not part of the encyclopedia. Please do *not* do this again. Thank you. CycloneYoris ^talk! 03:01, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AI generated content[edit]

Hello Ankush

Wikipedia administrators have flagged some of your content as AI generated.

The first instance was the iPhone article, pleae do not use AI generated content.

I am seeing multiple issues being reported for your work.

Please stop, slow down, read in detail what the issue is, ask questions to the editor of the page to clarify any well research and well written changes you are about to make before actually making them.

Sincerely

Ushnish Sengupta

Ultush (talk) 18:35, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]