User talk:FabyRockPhoto/sandbox

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Very good work and I love the pictures too!!! Gabrieledef96 (talk) 13:40, 11 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great improvement. Your first paragraph is not flowing yet, it should be compiled together. Do you really mean to use double points and dot coma in your last paragraph? I would suggest you pay attention to your punctuation marks. there are several unnecessary comas. It is better to replace "Argano Roberto citation" for a real scientific publication. --D'Catarina (talk) 17:25, 12 December 2019 (UTC)D'Catarina[reply]

Hi Fabiana! Nice work! You should check the errors in the references (signed in red). Probably something went wrong with the processing of the data added while publishing them, it happened to me too. You just have to edit the errors signed. I noticed that there are two “Here” at the beginning of the trophosome part. Also, for the last sentence, what do you think of “and is due to the storage of bacterial reactions’ waste” instead of “here are stored“? It sounds better in my head. Hope I’ve been helpful, good work! --Ottaviaiac (talk) 17:01, 15 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Fabiana, I read your article and I really appreciated it, it is full of references and all the passages are clear, i like soo much you immagines, good job! Flavia Caccaviello (talk) 17:11, 21 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]