User talk:Ebeginnings
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Hello, Ebeginnings, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:23, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
Peer review of capillary pressure by Ebeginnings
For the first equation It would be most helpful to define p_c, as the capillary pressure as well as the other variables. In the first paragraph it may be beneficial to do a introduction that doesn't have as much jargon. This would be helpful for those who visit the page without an immediate knowledge of the technical terms.
The microfluidics paragraph is very succinctly written, and conveys the underlying purpose well. Good use of a real life example of microfluidic devices.
Looking at the structure of the article, I would recommend a section of history or example calculations to separate the introduction from the applications.
The table of various ways to calculate capillary pressure is user-friendly and links to other content that can be researched. Good job.
The term capillary pressure and its' effect on capillary blood flow is fascinating, and gives the article substance.