User talk:DevonJamesKing/Autonomous sensory meridian response
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"Expressions such as "Her words were really touching" encapsulate the intuitive link between the people around us and our sense of touch" is essay like and should be removed, FYI. It doesn't belong in an encyclopedia. Biosthmors (talk) 23:30, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- I'm fine with omitting that, I must be honest the article I posted wasn't 100% complete but since we were required to post it yesterday I went ahead and submitted what I had. Do you think the topic has any chance of remaining on Wikipedia if I were to exclude information like that? DevonJamesKing (talk) 23:38, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- See User_talk:Biosthmors#Reply_for_article_Autonomous_sensory_meridian_response for that converstation. =) Biosthmors (talk) 23:41, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I think I have included everything I intended to and would be ready to submit. If you have time to take a look before 7pm today and see anything I should omit please let me know! Otherwise I will just submit it before then, and if it gets deleted again, I'll have to try again..DevonJamesKing (talk) 16:40, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Well, I can play around with it... You can always revert. I think you must just get another speedy delete as it is. Biosthmors (talk) 17:57, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I think I have included everything I intended to and would be ready to submit. If you have time to take a look before 7pm today and see anything I should omit please let me know! Otherwise I will just submit it before then, and if it gets deleted again, I'll have to try again..DevonJamesKing (talk) 16:40, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- See User_talk:Biosthmors#Reply_for_article_Autonomous_sensory_meridian_response for that converstation. =) Biosthmors (talk) 23:41, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- Please read WP:OR. Biosthmors (talk) 18:12, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- I think I will submit it as is before 7pm (since that is when it is due for our class) and Prof. Potter said he is only going to grade the most recent submission before 7pm today. Then I could go and delete the sections "background" through "chills" and keep the lead/opening paragraph, "Reception" and "In popular culture" after 7pm. and worry about developing it later.DevonJamesKing (talk) 20:49, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Never mind, I am just going to create the new page Chills (neuroscience) as you suggested.DevonJamesKing (talk) 21:34, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- I think I will submit it as is before 7pm (since that is when it is due for our class) and Prof. Potter said he is only going to grade the most recent submission before 7pm today. Then I could go and delete the sections "background" through "chills" and keep the lead/opening paragraph, "Reception" and "In popular culture" after 7pm. and worry about developing it later.DevonJamesKing (talk) 20:49, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Please read WP:OR. Biosthmors (talk) 18:12, 28 November 2012 (UTC)