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Hello Audrick, good job making the article appealing. I really like your content and body structure as you have a good flow. I want to point out that your lead sectionn is quite difficult to read and I thinnk is better to split into two paragraph then one big chunk of paragraph. I also really like the pictures you point out and the table you created. In the last paragraph of future developments, maaybe you can add more to this section as it is quite short. remeber to review your article again before submiting, because I read in your application section is quite biased as you state that MNP is an excellent alternative. The safety is quite short tto many expand it by one sentence to make reaaders understand more. Sources and references looks fine. Overall, great job.