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Your submission at Articles for creation: 2023 Cajon Pass runaway train (September 16)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gorden 2211 was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It's not clear that this event has lasting impact, and there is not much lasting coverage on this derailment.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Gorden 2211 (talk) 00:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I realized it was a work in progress. 60.241.84.63 (talk) 21:07, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 60.241.84.63! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Gorden 2211 (talk) 00:04, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southern Pacific 4404 (September 18)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ca was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I see that you added some secondary sources to the mix. However, one just mentioning the train in passing(not in-depth) in a caption. This source seems good and in-depth. Please find more sources like this one. You are on a good track!

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Ca ^{talk to me!} 12:04, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Did you mean by mentioning one in the further reading? because I was trying to make the citations work properly if Southern Pacific 4404 could get past the AfC submissions. And the reason I am asking this is because I am confused if you meant by the further reading or if you want me to search for more references on the locomotive. 60.241.84.63 (talk) 21:06, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

By the sounds of that, it is very close, all it needs is more references that suit it good and then BANG!. It will get FREEDOM! 220.240.166.58 (talk) 01:01, 21 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southern Pacific 5239 (September 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Trainsandotherthings was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sources are exclusively self-published and therefore fail to meet GNG.

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Trainsandotherthings (talk) 01:54, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Western Rail Inc. (September 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Trainsandotherthings was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sources affiliated with the subject are primary and not independent. A bill of sale is also a primary source.

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Trainsandotherthings (talk) 01:58, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Southern Pacific 5472 (September 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Trainsandotherthings was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The Luna book only says a few sentences about the locomotive, and almost all other sources are affiliated with the Niles Canyon Railway and therefore not independent. Diesel shop reference is a single entry in a table with only a few words. No sources contribute towards notability.

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Trainsandotherthings (talk) 02:03, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Norfolk and Western 2174 (September 19)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Trainsandotherthings was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Trainsandotherthings (talk) 23:55, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Chicago and North Western 7009 has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chicago and North Western 7009. Thanks! Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 18:57, 20 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chicago and North Western 7009 has been accepted[edit]

Chicago and North Western 7009, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 18:57, 20 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Southern Pacific 5472 for deletion[edit]

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The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Southern Pacific 5472 until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

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Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:24, 13 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Union Pacific 3967 for deletion[edit]

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Your draft article, Draft:2023 Cajon Pass runaway train[edit]

Hello, 60.241.84.63. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "2023 Cajon Pass runaway train".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 14:05, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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