User:Waiyanphyohein

WAIYANPHOHEIN

He is a Student majoring in Computer Science to modify artificial intelligence of robot at LaGuardia Community College, Queens, New York. Currently, he is working on editing Octavia Bulter's Fledgling assigned by Joy Taylor, his English professor.He is an inquisitive boy with high hope on everything. Being a student is not enough for him,so he joined Myanmar Club from LaGuardia Community College. Link to page is here.

Comment for SandBox Team 4: -Doesn't need dash after 10 from "Plot" first statement. -Needs to put comma inside the quotation mark, "Ina". -Need to put S at depend from second statement of the Plot. -Using semi-colon after Therefore from third statement.

For Fledgling he is working on, the Link is here.