User:Dareu21

Bio

I am (1997-present) a student in Everett Community college. Majoring in IT. I like playing sports such as soccer, basketball, and swimming. I lived in 5 different countries including U.S. I can speak 3 languages, and they are: Arabic, Turkish, and English.

I have been using Wikipedia as source in my essays. Now, it's time for me to be a part of Wikipedia community and help others to make it a better source place. I will be editing and writing about science, technology, and religion. I choose these three topics to edit and write about because our world is going advanced in technology and science. And for religion is because U.S is diverse, which makes me full of curiosity to learn more about other aspects and believes.

Article Critique

I have been interested in Egyptian movies. I know lot of comedian actors. So I visited Mohamed Henedi's page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: information structure, not up to date, and lack of citations.

Structure

The page is missing lot of information about the actor's life. I notice that the page only covers his age, where he from, and the movies he been part of. The page should cover how the actor started his journey in filming field. Also, the page doesn't give any information about the awards Mohamed Henedi got. The one paragraph section doesn't provide the reader with much of information about the actor's life or how did he first start as an actor.

Age

The article is not up to date with anything after 2017. The second reference on the article is out of date (14 Dec, 2014). The reference doesn't include any information about his current movies, life, or situation. If there could be a newer source to provide us with the actor's current situation would be phenomenal. Or adding additional information on the page could be another good option.

Citations

There are only three references on this page, and two of these references are out of date. It's difficult to follow the information been given in the page with the sources. I would love to see more sources been added to the page.

Summary

Overall, I would rate this page as "poor." The information been covered on the page is so much little comparing to what there are to say about Mohamed Henedi's life. There should be a section about his early life and about the awards he got. There also should be more sources to support the claims.