Template:Did you know nominations/Pilgrim of Eternity

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 17:37, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

Pilgrim of Eternity[edit]

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... that Chris Doohan, son of original Chief Engineer Montgomery Scott portrayer James Doohan (pictured), played the role in the Star Trek fan production, Pilgrim of Eternity?

Comment: may just need inline citations, which i actually dont know how to do with multiple usages of a single ref.

Created by Igottheconch (talk). nominated by Mercurywoodrose (talk) at 05:32, 6 November 2013 (UTC).

I did some copy editing, and I think more needs to be done to the prose. References have been moved down into the body of the article, rather than in the lead. I'm not sure all references apply to existing prose. Any photo you use in DYK needs to also be in the article (it's nice to see Scotty). I like the article, and am a fan of all things Trek. However, I would advise some copy editing and scrutiny by an editor who is experienced with similar articles. — Maile (talk) 00:01, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I agree, I have little experience either with DYK's, or with Star Trek or webtv articles. I have included this in the various wikiprojects, but i am reluctant to canvass, as I understand its a little tasteless. I just added the scotty image to the article. I really wish we had an image of Chris Doohan. thanks so much for moving the refs down, i should be able to parse that, but so far i remain stubbornly ignorant of the techniques. I have no doubt my prose needs some work, but im pretty sure its all ref'd (except the plot summary), and i will try to see if it matches up now.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 05:09, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Length, history and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 22:14, 29 November 2013 (UTC)