Template:Did you know nominations/Mr. Misunderstood
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The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 19:00, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
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Mr. Misunderstood[edit]
- ... that Mr. Misunderstood was surprisingly released to his fan club members, The Church Choir, the day before the 2015 Country Music Association Awards?
- Reviewed: QPQ = Edith Villiers
Created by The Cross Bearer (talk). Self-nominated at 03:51, 10 November 2015 (UTC).
- Comment: this really needs some serious copyediting. There are numerous confusing and run-on statements throughout the text. The hook is also confusing because it's suggests that it was the CMAA tie-in that was surprising, but that's not what billboard is talking about. Suggest:
- ALT1: ... that Eric Church's album Mr. Misunderstood was released with no prior warning, and sent to his fan club members the day before it went on sale?
- Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:49, 11 November 2015 (UTC)
- Agreed. The hook from editor, Maury Markowitz, is way better than the one I came up with, thank you!The Cross Bearer (talk) 05:07, 12 November 2015 (UTC)
OK, date, cite, hook, newness, all good to go. Maury Markowitz (talk) 20:14, 20 November 2015 (UTC)