Template:Did you know nominations/Loch Vaa

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:01, 29 November 2019 (UTC)

Loch Vaa

Loch Vaa
Loch Vaa

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 19:40, 22 October 2019 (UTC).

Interesting lake, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and shows fine, but is not too specific about this loch, also - 2011 - not about the "recent" situation. - I approved the original hook, thinking that crannog is a bit to unknown a word to attract, but it could be just me. I'd be more appealed by "nystery of the disappearing loch", - open to alternatives. Define "recent", perhaps clearly say May 2019 than argue about it later. Alternatives only below, please, and we could also just leave it as is. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:44, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
Hi Gerda Arendt, thanks for the review. I quite liked the crannog hooks just because the name is so unusual (ALT2 brings to my mind Nessie-style monsters). I think the "mysterious disappearance" of water is a bit of sensational headlining by the BBC, SEPA seem happy it is just down to low rainfall. Happy to consider any alternative hook suggestions - Dumelow (talk) 09:29, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
... in which case I also approve ALT1. You will know that crannog may receive more "hits" than the loch, as Clara Schumann received 2.5 times as many as her piano concerto. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)