Template:Did you know nominations/KGTV (Iowa)

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The result was: promoted by Lightburst talk 15:17, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

KGTV (Iowa)

Moved to mainspace by Sammi Brie (talk). Self-nominated at 05:21, 18 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/KGTV (Iowa); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - See below.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Sammi Brie: Nice work on the article. I have a minor nitpick about the hook: "years after it closed, the studios of an Iowa TV station". There is a singular-plural mismatch. If it's the studios that closed, you can change "it" to "they". If it's KGTV that closed, then this is a dangling modifier, and I would reword this to something like "... that years after an Iowa TV station closed, its studios became the headquarters for the state police radio network?". Epicgenius (talk) 17:52, 18 January 2024 (UTC) Epicgenius (talk) 17:52, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

    • I didn't see it quite that way because I figured the focus would be "an Iowa TV station". Your ALT0a is fine, Epicgenius. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 17:57, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Looks good, then. Thanks for the response. Epicgenius (talk) 18:00, 18 January 2024 (UTC)