Template:Did you know nominations/Israel Beltrán Montes

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Israel Beltrán Montes

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• ... that Israel Beltrán Montes has twice been a deputy and a municipal president, each time representing Ciudad Cuauhtémoc?

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• Comment: All sources in Spanish. My second expansion of a Mexican deputy stub this year.

5x expanded by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 06:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC).

• The article was expanded 5x. It is now long enough. There is one wikilink (LV Legislature) that is broken, so just fix that. The article uses inline citations. The article is written from a neutral POV. There don't seem to be any copyvios. It would be nice if you could get a picture on the page, especially since he's still alive. I would reword the hook to say:"that Israel Beltran Montes was elected as a deputy twice and once as a municipal president for Ciudad Cauhtemoc." just to make it flow better. The information is in the article although not as explicitly stated as in the hook. Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 20:49, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

• @Amgisseman(BYU): Responding to each concern...

• There is no article on the LV Legislature. See Category:Congress of Mexico by session. We have articles for the 50th Legislature and 56th through 63rd.
• I don't know where I could get a nonfree image of him.
• I'll take your hook suggestion with one change, as he has also been a two-time municipal president:

• ALT1: ... that Israel Beltrán Montes was elected twice to the Chamber of Deputies and twice as municipal president of Ciudad Cuauhtémoc?

Raymie (t • c) 21:02, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

• ALT1 reads well and is supported by foreign-language refs, cited inline. Rest of review per Amgisseman(BYU). ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:18, 29 May 2016 (UTC)