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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:28, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Irma Lozada[edit]

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  • ... that Irma Lozada was the first female police officer to die in the line of duty in New York?

Created/expanded by Marine 69-71 (talk). Self nom at 20:38, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

  • Article length and date, hook length, and hook fact verified. Prose is fine, sources are reliable, and I didn't find any evidence of close paraphrasing/plagiarism. I added a citation needed tag (unrelated to the hook), and suggest that her age at death be mentioned in the article. Instead of "in action", would "in the line of duty" be a better way to phrase this? Sasata (talk) 04:10, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Thank you, I rephrased and provided the citation requested, plus her age at the time of her death has been posted in the infobox. Tony the Marine (talk) 04:45, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
  • There is a direct quote near the bottom of the article that needs a citation. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:50, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm surprised at myself that I missed that one, however is now taken care of. Tony the Marine (talk) 02:40, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Problem I saw was fixed. Tick based on previous review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:47, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
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