Template:Did you know nominations/Indian National Commission for Co-Operation with UNESCO

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 02:37, 23 February 2013 (UTC).
Article deleted due to copyvio.

Indian National Commission for Co-Operation with UNESCO

(

• Back to T:TDYK
• Article history

)

• ... that the Indian National Commission for UNESCO was formed in March 1949 under the Ministry of Human Resource Development by Government of India?

Created by Gfosankar (talk). Self nom at 11:37, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

• All DYK rules followed. Good to go.--Nvvchar. 08:28, 25 January 2013 (UTC)

• This has a number of problems. First, the article has only 1363 prose characters according to DYKcheck. The minimum is 1500 characters. Also, there is very little meat here. What has this commission actually done? Finally, the hook is neither interesting nor grammatical. Perhaps if the commission had done anything of note or interest, it could find its way into an ALT hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:34, 26 January 2013 (UTC)

• Expanded. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:07, 4 February 2013 (UTC)

The article is new enough and now long enough, but as noted above, the hook is boring. The subject of the article is of a dry nature but I have added an extra sentence and suggest the following, still unexciting hook: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:17, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

• ALT1 ... that the Indian National Commission for Co-Operation with UNESCO is overseeing activities in India with regard to the United Nations Decade of Education for Sustainable Development (2005–2014)?

• The following hook may solve above problems.Gfosankar (talk) 04:50, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
• ALT2 ... that UNESCO is the only United Nations agency to have a global network of national cooperating bodies like the Indian National Commission for UNESCO?

• ALT2 is an acceptable hook with inline citation. However, I find that the article is a copyright infringement being almost identical to the source material in wording. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:12, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
• Agreed and deleted. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:46, 22 February 2013 (UTC)