Template:Did you know nominations/Hasan al-Kharrat
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The result was: promoted by Ashwin147 (talk) 07:12, 14 April 2013 (UTC).
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Hasan al-Kharrat[edit]
- ... that during the Great Syrian Revolt, rebel commander Hasan al-Kharrat led the capture of the Azm Palace in Damascus, which served as the residence High-Commissioner Maurice Sarrail?
Created by Al Ameer son (talk). Self nominated at 01:47, 9 April 2013 (UTC).
detailed article on good sources, accepted AGF. Article: please clean up the order of refs. Infobox: is he notable as a night watchman? - I would drop "occupation". Hook: the average reader might want to know what High Commissioner. What do you think of this?
- ALT1: ... that during the Great Syrian Revolt, rebel commander Hasan al-Kharrat (pictured) led the capture of the Azm Palace, aiming for Maurice Sarrail, the High Commissioner of the French Mandate? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:36, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- I like ALT1, let's use it instead. I addressed your concerns (organizing the refs, explaining the role of High-Commissioner) and added a specific mention of the rebels' intent to capture Sarrail himself. --Al Ameer son (talk) 17:19, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:44, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that during the Great Syrian Revolt, rebel commander Hasan al-Kharrat (pictured) led the capture of the Azm Palace, aiming for Maurice Sarrail, the High Commissioner of the French Mandate? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:36, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
