Talk:Zbrojovka Z 4

Zbrojovka Z 4 was nominated as a Engineering and technology good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (May 5, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. 750 h+ 06:43, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 17:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 06:31, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this @CosXZ:.

Comments[edit]

CosXZ, I'm sorry but I'm going to have to fail this nomination. Prose needs shaping up. But I will leave some comments:

The Zbrojovka Z 4, nicknamed the "Strong Four", was a small passenger car produced in 1933–1936 by the company Zbrojovka Brno. ==> The Zbrojovka Z 4, nicknamed the "Strong Four", is a small passenger car that was produced from 1933 to 1936 by the company Zbrojovka Brno.
"A total of 2750 cars were produced in five series" inconsistency; why is it "2750" here but "2,750 somewhere else.
"In the early 1930s, Zbrojovka Brno produced the Z 9 type, a car which sales results did not meet expectations." read that again

I recommend you take this to WP:GOCE, because it absolutely has the potential to be a Good Article. Best and best of luck, 750 h+ 06:42, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.