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I've made a number of grammatical and stylistic tweaks.
"with his tone and expressions changing the most" - what do you mean by "expressions"?
"There he awakens his initial Persona, Izanagi (イザナギ), a swordsman wearing a black coat, which he uses to fight embodiements of humans' negative feelings, the Shadows. Yu exclusively wields two-handed sword-type weapons." - Source?
"Writers from GiantBomb named the character "Charlie Tunoku" in their original videos of the game. For the release of Persona 4 Arena, GiantBomb joked to an Atlus member about how the name of the character, Yu Narukami, was incorrect and addressed how Charlie Tunoku became popular within their site's readers." - Is this relevant to the character's reception?
"besides being entertaining to watch, by the series' end all of Yu's actions have allowed him "become a character in his own right."" - Which is entertaining to watch: Yu or his actions?
I don't think Gematsu is a reliable source. Are replacements available from ones listed at WP:VG/RS or a WP:ANIME equivalent?
I also don't know about The Fandom Post (I genuinely don't know). Is it acknowledged by WP:ANIME?
Made tweaks to all concerns. Also, Fandom Post is Chris Beveridge's latest website. The writer has been in RS for a long time but he changed website.Tintor2 (talk) 11:50, 11 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I've read it over again and everything looks solid. Good work. Tezero (talk) 16:27, 11 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 17:02, 11 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
