Talk:William Murray, 2nd Earl of Tullibardine

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Clarification[edit]

This sentence needs some tweaking to make sense: "According to the English diplomat George Nicholson, James VI he and James Drummond of Inchaffray were made servants in the king's chamber in August 1601 at Perth." Seasider53 (talk) 07:44, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have improved this, so I think.Unoquha (talk) 09:53, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]