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Fernando[edit]

The section i added on hasan was there because hasan and his team were the ones who developed TUBA surgery. He pioneered all the procedures now used hens why he deserves a section on this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fblan001 (talk • contribs) 16:36, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Read the talk, This was already discussed  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fblan001 (talk • contribs) 18:25, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The section regarding Dr. Hasan needs to be revisited because you are citing a self-publication which is tantamount to self-promotion. Can you find an alternative source that would provide credence to the claims you published about him? If you cannot, the content should be removed. Macnoy3k (talk) 04:50, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Anatomy[edit]

I think the new anatomy section is overkill for this article.--Taylornate (talk) 01:45, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Anatomy[edit]

Hi, Fyrael:

I have reverted your deletion of required medical information, because it truncates the full information the reader requires; look up Wikipedia:The perfect article, bullet number four.

Please write to me, and discuss why you have deleted relevant medical information about a surgical procedure. Are you a physician?

What do you mean: We don't need it? Please reply and explain.

Otto Placik (talk) 22:23, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I mentioned this above. It's overkill. It does not make sense to have a section on general breast anatomy take up the majority of the article. It could make sense to have a much, much shorter section on anatomy that would link to another article about the breast that would go into more detail. Fyrael implied that you have put this information in other pages as well. I haven't looked myself, but if you are pasting this information into multiple articles, that kind of redundancy can be undesirable. I noticed that you like to have these discussions on your user talk page, but please keep the discussion here so everyone can contribute.--Taylornate (talk) 23:33, 11 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Promotional material[edit]

I have removed recently-added material that seems promotional in nature and/or is not backed by reliable medical sources. I have made similar edits to Abdominoplasty, Trans-umbilical breast augmentation, and Buttock augmentation. In order to avoid redundancy, please discuss these changes to all three articles at Talk:Abdominoplasty#Promotional_material. --Taylornate (talk) 03:43, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Already disputed this once before. Hasan is the creator of the procedure and should be in this article, not including him would be like having an article about relativity and not mentioning Einstein. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fblan001 (talk • contribs) 13:25, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fernando fblan001 - I have the medical journals that list him as the person who created the procedure, Will upload them soon enough. Fblan001 —Preceding undated comment added 15:21, 29 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]