Talk:Tracy Does Conan/GA1
GA Review[edit]
There are only a few little fixes that need to be made for the article to pass GAN:
- It was written by, the series' creator and executive producer -- don't need comma.
- it was directed by, one of the season's supervising producers -- and again.
- Change 6PM to 6 p.m. or 6 pm, per WP:MOSNUM#Times.
- he hasn't been taking his medication correctly -- convert contraction to "has not".
- Liz gives the instructions to Kenneth Parcell (Jack McBrayer) who has to visit multiple identical until he finds the correct one, which will have Tracy's new medication -- this whole sentence doesn't make sense to me, from the fact that he has to "visit multiple identical" onwards. Maybe there's a word missing in there?
- watching television at the time of the broadcast, in the U.S. -- even though it looks weird, you'll need another full-stop/period in there to indicate the sentence end.
- Close Matt Webb Mitovich's second quote.
- I think Robert Canning's review has been given a little too much weight; WP:MOSTV#Reception advises that reviewers' comments should not exceed about two per critic, and Canning currently has four, including the 5/10 rating.
That's pretty much it. You've got seven days to make changes so good luck in that time! —97198 talk 07:27, 31 July 2008 (UTC)