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translation original in Japanese was dated 2016-02-28T13:58. --Omotecho (talk) 05:15, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, User:DAJF, thank you for copy edit. I am afraid we have different view about Shikoku Pilgrimage. It is not a mere tourist attraction, but is rooted in religious background. Wouldn't it be better to put it under a new section, maybe History or Historical background? The episode of John Manjirō could be moved as well (not quite sure if it is the best anyhow). I wish you have referred to Shikoku Pilgrimage before you edited.
I will try and rewrite the part of Mejikano Sato roadside station, as well as the Ocean sunfish for wildlife tour. The facility was named Mejikano Sato since Mejika is a Kōchi dialect meaning sōdagatsuo, with which they produce sōdabushi. The factory is built at the back of the building, and providing a factory tour to the tourists is to encourage them purchase sōdabushi at the store. To have Ocean sunfish for a wildlife tour is a rare attraction not seen often in other parts of Japan. Hope we would discuss on those points as above. --Omotecho (talk) 09:59, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Easily fixed. I've moved the "Shikoku Pilgrimage" section out of the "Tourist attractions" section, as I agree it probably did not fit well in there. When adding other tourist-related information, just be careful not to make it sound like a reprint of a local tourist guide (e.g. with "you can visit xyz" type blurb). Such details would be more appropriate over on WikiVoyage. --DAJF (talk) 10:44, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
