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This article was listed for deletion on March 8 2005, the consensus was that it should be deleted. However I declared the vote void due to the fact that the original article, the one listed for deletion, was replaced by a new article on a different subject written by Dab. For more information please see Wikipedia:Votes for deletion/Tipu's Tiger. Rje 02:29, Mar 25, 2005 (UTC)

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The german brother of Tipu Sahib tiger will roar the mainpage on tuesday. --Polentario (talk) 10:12, 6 September 2009 (UTC)

Many language editathon on 16 July 2011

See wmuk:VandA_Wikilounge for details of the edit-a-thon for this article. If you can help with creating non-English versions, please remember to add a note or ask questions here to help coordinate and encourage help from other e-volunteers. You can chat live with others who are keen to help at #wikimedia-glam connect. Thanks Fæ (talk) 06:31, 16 July 2011 (UTC)

If you have questions that can help improve content, please raise them here. The V&A Wikilounge event had the benefit of packs of photocopies of source material that were taken away by some of the participants for later use, they will be keeping this page on their watch-list and would be be only to happy to help other contributors. Cheers Fæ (talk) 15:05, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

Research suggestion

Here is a bit of original research idea for someone to look at (outside of WP) - considering that there were Swiss mercenaries (see Charles-Daniel de Meuron who was actually born in Neuchatel and was only later to ally with the English, Neuchatel was the home of Jaquet-Droz automata also here ) - perhaps the Swiss were involved in the making of the "tyger". Shyamal (talk) 04:31, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Later use of the tiger (vs. lion) image in Punch, 1857

"The British Lion's Vengeance on the Bengal Tiger", Punch cartoon from 1857.

I have uploaded this Punch cartoon to commons. This might be used as an illustration for the later interpretation of the iconography and how the British used it to political advantage. There is a shift of context of a few decades and a shift in political context, so rather than plonking the image in this section straight away, I would prefer to see a bit of talk page consensus before deciding one way or the other on relevance. The image can be argued as derivative in that the tiger is in the process of killing a victim in a pose very similar to Tipu's Tiger, albeit with the victim not being dressed as a soldier. Cheers Fæ (talk) 09:19, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Clearly the iconography continues, the image of the civilian here is used to invoke the helpless, innocent victim being preyed upon by the "new" tiger. I'd say this is relevant. AshLin (talk) 09:56, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
It repeats the Seringapatam Medal, but 50 years later, but fine if there is room. Apparently in an Indian context, lions & tigers were essentially regarded as interchangeable, at least in the South (Stronge says somewhere) where the Indian Lion had long been extinct. Johnbod (talk) 16:48, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
Hmmm, that is unusual but will need the reference to be able to judge this. To the best of my limited knowledge, tigers and lions should not be interchangeable even in the South Indian context. AshLin (talk) 19:00, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Under glass?

I read in a ref somewhere that Tipu's Tiger is now under glass. Is that correct? AshLin (talk) 19:03, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

It certainly is - more behind glass in a big display. That's in the article. There is probably a ref in de Almeida or one othose, but I wouln't worry too much. You can see the flash on the glass clearly in the amateur photo used. Johnbod (talk) 19:23, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: ♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:02, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Beginning read through. Will formally review this once points have been addressed.♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:03, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Lead
  • "in his summer palace" which palace? Please wikilink and mention where it was. Seringapatam?  Done. No, Bangalore. AshLin (talk) 16:30, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Please wikilink India House and the Victoria and Albert Museum.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Please place V&A in brackets after Victoria and Albert Museum as later on you refer to it as V&A.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • For the sake of further down in the article and image can you add (Tippoo Saib/Sultan) after Tipu's name in brackets as it was very commonly spelt Tippoo.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Background
  • "Tipu's Tiger was originally made for Tipu Sultan in the Kingdom of Mysore (today in the Indian state of Karnataka) around 1795. " - citation for date please.  Done KellenT 20:04, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "close co-operation" -why the quote marks?
It's a quote, and best left as such. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Since/if you have access to the Ord-Hume source, could you put in quotes in the references so that this is clear? Same for the other quotes. KellenT 18:56, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Done the 2 mentioned, one to a 2 page range since I haven't brought Ord-Hume on holiday. Johnbod (talk) 11:31, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
Exact page added. Johnbod (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
Description
  • 71.2 cm high and 172 cm . Convert measurements please to also show feet and inches.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • In both the background and description section I notice a lot of "probably" and "may have". It is best to stick to fact as much as possible. If though you are certain it has some meaning keep it.
There is a lot of uncertainty as to the facts, which the article reflects. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "obviously male". Again why the quotation marks? If a hint of a Tiger penis can be seen, say so (LOL).
Again it's a quote. There are visible testicles, which are referred to later. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
  • You say "The presence of French artisans and French army engineers within Tipu's court has led many historians to suggest there was French input into the mechanism of this automaton" . Shouldn't this have been said in the background where you vaguely say "some of the French craftsmen who visited Tipu's court probably contributed to the internal works of the tiger." I'd rather you asserted this in the background or just once in either section rather than twice.
History
  • ""These shrieks and growls were the constant plague of the student busy at work in the Library of the old India House, when the Leadenhall Street public, unremittingly, it appears, were bent on keeping up the performances of this barbarous machine. Luckily, a kind fate has deprived him of his handle, and stopped up, we are happy to think, some of his internal organs... and we do sincerely hope he will remain so, to be seen and admired, if necessary, but to be heard no more". Redundant quote as you've already said this above. Please consider removing this quote and just say it disturbed the students and to their relief it disappeared.
It's great quote with a lot of character; there are evident stylistic differences here. please remember it is not the job of the reviewer to impose his stylistic preferences. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Hardly a stylistic preference. You've repeated yourself unnecessarily, having already explained much of this in the preceding sentence. Nevertheless, it isn't stopping this from being promoted... ♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:23, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Please wikilink Fife House, India Museum, South Kensington, World War II, and Museum of Modern.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:30, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Are you sure these are the correct links? WWII should not be linked per MOS. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Wrong Fife House; India Museum is unlikely to get an article & WWII doesn't need a lk so removed. Johnbod (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "Tipu's Tiger is a notable example of early musical automata from India,[27] and also for the fact that it was especially constructed for him." Stranded short paragraph, would be best moved into a paragraph in the description/background.  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "The replica itself was also associated with a historic Scottish event having been made in 1986 for 'The Enterprising Scot' exhibition, " Which historical event, seems vague? Or is the 'The Enterprising Scot' exhibition, the historical event referred to? In that case it is superfluous to say "associated with a historic Scottish event".  Done AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "Tipu's Tiger has not been the subject of an official repatriation request, presumably due to the ambiguity underlying Tipu's image in the eyes of Indians." What is meant by this? That there is a difference in opinion into whether he was liked or loathed? Seems a little awkward.
Not at all. He was loathed by Hindus and hero-worshipped by Muslims, not just then but even today. Will clarify. AshLin (talk) 16:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Personally I don't think a reason is needed for the lack of a repatriation request; I think India has made few if any from the UK. Tipu's divided reputation should be mentioned somehow though. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Symbolism
  • NCOs? in full please.  Done AshLin (talk) 15:14, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Please wikilink noblesse oblige.  Done AshLin (talk) 15:14, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "Tipu's Tiger is also notable as a literal image of a tiger killing a British Officer, " Hang on, didn't you say earlier it was stressed his exact identity was unknown and was referred to as European?
In this case, the son of a British officer, Hugh Munro was killed by a real tiger - hence the british considered it as a symbolism of British relevance, the theme appearring on British Staffordshire pottery. Earlier in the article, the term European is being used as an academic caution, though Tippoo only had issues to the point of conflict with the British. AshLin (talk) 15:14, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Changed to "European". Johnbod (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Please wikilink Punch.  Done AshLin (talk) 15:14, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Kalter? Full name, link and occupation needed. e.g British archeologist Barratt Kalter.  Done AshLin (talk) 15:35, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • "The collection of Western and Indian art by Tipu Sultan is seen as motivated by the need to display his wealth and legitimise his authority over his subjects who were predominantly Hindu and did not share his religion, viz. Islam. " Who sees it? Sources for this claim?  Done AshLin (talk) 15:35, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
  • I think the full width box would look better in a side box, like you see in the Clint Eastwood article. Also shouldn't it be quoted?  Done AshLin (talk) 15:35, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Derivative works
  • Royal College of Art and Bill Reid, please wikilink.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:01, 7 August 2011 (UTC)  Done AshLin (talk) 15:41, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
    • Note, we were confused initially, the existing article called "Bill Reid" is not the same artist as the metal sculptor quoted in this article (most significantly, this one is still alive whilst the article is a BDP), however he's notable enough for the same artefact to have a full page illustration in Stronge's book and so inclusion here is justifiable. Fæ (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Okay, I'm done. The remaining points may be answered by User:Johnbod who has the relevant references and has authored those parts. AshLin (talk) 16:30, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Thankyou.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:39, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

I'm on holiday with a strange machine & can't respond or edit as fully as noemal for the moment. Johnbod (talk) 11:22, 8 August 2011 (UTC)


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Very interesting read indeed, fascinating subject. Seems to meet all of the requirements for GA. It appears the vast majority of my suggestions above have been met. It needs further research I feel if it is to pass FA but it appears to be a satisfactory GA. Congratulations to the contributors to this article who have produced a great result. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:27, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

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