Talk:The Old Man and the "C" Student/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Indicate 6.9 million viewers watched the episode in the lead (some might not understand the Nielsen rating)
Wikilink Milhouse and Martin
Why does Homer's hatred of Bart cause him to fail miserably? It's been a while since I saw this episode
Abe -> Grampa (change?)
Last three sentences in cultural ref section need citations
Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations
Wikilink ref publishers (Pioneer Press etc)

Just make the above fixes and the article will be good to go!

Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:37, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks great. Pass for GA Ruby2010 comment! 18:28, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]