Talk:The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein

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The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein was a Media and drama good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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Date	Process	Result
September 9, 2009	Good article nominee	Not listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 24, 2009.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Phineas and Ferb episode "The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein" has been nominated for an Primetime Emmy Award in the category "Outstanding Special Class - Short-format Animated Programs"?

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Picture and subtitle[edit]

you dont put the actors or actress's name on subtitle they dont do it for other shows so they wont do it here Joe59108 (talk) 19:15, 16 August 2009 (UTC)Joe59108[reply]

Not true, nor is it a policy. Also, you're change was invalid - Dr. Phineastein is not portrayed by Phineas Flynn, as he a fictional character. Vincent Martella voiced him, but as it seemed useless in this situation I did remove it, for aesthetic reasons. Thank you, The Flash ^{talk} 02:41, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

In depth review[edit]

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Prose[edit]

Along with the separate story, "Oil on Candace"

Along with a seperate story [...]

Written by Martin Olson and Jon Colton Barry, its storyboards

Written by Martin Olson and Jon Colton Barry, the storyboards

To occupy the time, the doctor tells Perry of his Victorian ancestor

To occupy the time, Doofenshmirtz tells Perry of his Victorian ancestor.

In a previous line, the article talks about Dr.Phineastein. Since there are two doctors, the article needs to specify which one.

Production[edit]

Quoation marks are not needed over every term of The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein
The production section is weak
There is a paragraph with just two sentences
See the production section in Homer's Barbershop Quartet for more details.

Lead[edit]

The paragraphs in the lead are too short.
There are too many paragraphs for an article of this size.

This article has a few problems, which I will give one week to fix. Thanks Warrior 4321 01:41, 2 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Since no efforts were made to try and fix the article, the article has failed the good article review. warrior 4321 23:19, 9 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]