Talk:Tell the Vision

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Review: October 2, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tell the Vision/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Like we agreed. – zmbro _(talk) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Infobox and lead[edit]

No recording dates/ranges?

Not that is known of, sorry. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Does drill apply to both versions? Jw

The NPR review also calls it drill; I have mentioned this in prose now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shouldn't all writers be linked the first time?

See WP:OVERLINK to understand why some are not linked here. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shouldn't West just be labeled as "West" in producers?

This is not a track listing; remember Template:Infobox song. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A choir from what?

I did some research into this now, but unfortunately I can't find anything regarding where the choir are sampled from. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development[edit]

Looks good

Music and lyrics[edit]

Same questions from above related to this section apply here

See previous. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Rest looks good

Release and reception[edit]

Any reviews for the Donda version?

Done I have added some now --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance[edit]

Looks good

Credits and personnel[edit]

Looks good

Charts[edit]

Looks good

Notes and references[edit]

I would add a source for the note just to be safe

Done --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Make sure instances of the album titles are italicized throughout

Done apart from Tidal refs --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Rest looks good

Final thoughts[edit]

Very well done overall, don't have too many complaints. Should be a GA in no time! – zmbro _(talk) 14:00, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Zmbro Thank you, I have covered everything now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fantastic. Happy to ✓ Pass – zmbro _(talk) 13:18, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]